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The Broken Doll by ~willuholdme:iconwilluholdme:

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they made a doll of me
cracked, broken, and incomplete
a doll no one could ever love
no one could ever care for
they attatched me to strings
so they could control me
and help me to make
all the wrong decisions
but finally the string broke
and i fell
past the point of caring
what i was
or what i could become
the broken doll on the floor
is all i am
and all i ever will be
©2006-2009 ~willuholdme
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Author's Comments

first line is Skye's (:iconunclearvision:) as is the reference to the string breaking...

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preview is by :iconalizarinjen: go here to see it: [link]

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*Nikumaru Sep 21, 2006, 12:03:04 PM
Another feeling very well worded, Sara. :hug: Like how I feel betrayal and abandoness...

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One may tolerate a world of demons for the sake of an angel…
~Nikumaru :date: ~Nevian
There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio.
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~willuholdme Sep 21, 2006, 4:15:51 PM
:( :hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
*Nikumaru Sep 21, 2006, 9:18:53 PM
:cling: I hope you could write it off of you like this... :cuddle: ...otherwise know that there's friends here to support you.

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One may tolerate a world of demons for the sake of an angel…
~Nikumaru :date: ~Nevian
There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio.
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~ezzen16 Sep 21, 2006, 10:35:48 PM
U write ur moods n feelings so well!

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Luv ya, take care
ERin
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~willuholdme Sep 22, 2006, 7:42:31 AM
thanks...this was purely fictional for me tho' :hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
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~willuholdme Sep 22, 2006, 7:44:08 AM
:) thanks

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
*Nikumaru Sep 22, 2006, 8:04:23 AM
Oh... but your other comment you seemed so sad :(
I'm glad it's not from experience, then, though :cuddle:

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One may tolerate a world of demons for the sake of an angel…
~Nikumaru :date: ~Nevian
There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio.
:iconwilluholdme:
~willuholdme Sep 22, 2006, 5:06:32 PM
heh, i'm not sad :aww:
:cuddle:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
*Nikumaru Sep 23, 2006, 1:09:12 AM
:D Good... :glomp:

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One may tolerate a world of demons for the sake of an angel…
~Nikumaru :date: ~Nevian
There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio.
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