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You’re so beautiful you amaze me every time I look at you.
You’re the only one who could make me feel like this,
Scared to be away for only one second;
Scared you’ll cease to care.

Your smile lights up your face and I’d die to put it there
And kill anyone who tries to take it away.
No one will make you feel unwanted, unspecial, unloved.
Not while I’m here to hold you.

There could never be another to come close to what you are;
So completely perfect in your imperfections.
I swear I’ll never try to change you.
And you swear you’ll never change.

You’ll be there when I’m at the bottom.
Though “misery loves company” he’ll have to look somewhere else.
Since I love you more than anyone or anything else.

Nothing will hurt you while I’m here.
Safe together we’ll always be.
Our differences, rather than forcing us apart,
Will keep us closer together.

Hold tight and never let your grip slacken
And we’ll make this love truly last.
Where others have failed we alone shall succeed.

Perfection is the two of us together, you make me perfect.
©2005-2009 ~willuholdme
:iconwilluholdme:

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Okay, this is for you and If you didn't ask for a wedding present I would never have written this. Love ya! (including everyone who reads this) :blowkiss: :hug:

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:iconplacetobe:
Awww, that's lovely!

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And I turned to you and I said
"Don't you want a change? Let's break free from these dirty city walls
Go to a place where the air is clean and the sky is clear!"

But you don't have the same dreams that I do.
:iconwilluholdme:
^_^ Thankies! :hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconrevanrockinfreak:
that's pretty! :hug:

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Hi, David loves u - Check out ~StarrMagazine and ~Lyrical-Flusies

Go to [link] for a tasty Revan surprise ...
:iconwilluholdme:
:D Thanks. :hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconfree-bird:
aww, so nice. :)

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:iconwilluholdme:
thanks:)

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:iconiloveamanda:
um. wow. ;x very strong poem, its beautiful. means alot to me. you rock my socks lol. that pretty much lets you know how much i love your stuff :P you dont get lost on the way when your writing them, its the same feeling throughout the poems and its clear, lol i can relate to your poems more than i can relate to mine. awesome stuff :D

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shut your mouth.. . and open your eyes.
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i :heart: ~defkttn

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:iconsqueezil:
that's so beautiful...and i can actually relate to that on some level (that meaning that the other someone doesn't feel the same:() mind if i add it to my favs+??:D

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Clubs:
~David-Cook-fans*pixel-artists

Avatar base from Glass Temple
:iconforeverinspired:
i'm genreally the melancholy type...but this is pretty beautiful poetry...so thumbs up for your kool work!:thumbsup:

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still i search everywhere for it,
for it i still yearn,
and so i live in wait thinking that,
to my life, someday, peace would return. [link]
:iconmad-pain:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! It's so pretty! I luv you so much, and I am so happy I "made you" write this! :hug: :hug: :hug:

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Dareka o mamoru tame no tatakai.

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